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Sunday, January 10, 2010

Prompt #1

Task: Read the following prompt and answer to the best of your ability! Choose a symbol used in a novel or play of your choice and discuss its function in the world of the work. Be sure to give the title of the work and its author in the Introduction paragraph. You should strive for 4 - 5 paragraphs. Good Luck! After posting, read and comment on 4 other postings. Your comments should be helpful to the writer and may be things you noticed, something for them to think about, and some words of encouragement. You must complete your essay and your comments by Tuesday, January 12th!
The Use of "Le Bois" to Symbolize the Darkness of Human Nature
In the novel Wide Sargasso Sea by Jean Rhys, the main character, Antoinette, grows up on a failed plantation in Jamaica, surrounded by a wild and untamed landscape. Similar to the forest in Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness, the forests of Jamaica and nature symbolize the darker side of human nature, chiefly greed, exploitation, hatred, sinfulness, loss of innocence, and isolation.
The novel begins with Antoinette narrating her childhood. After the death of her father and the emancipation of slaves, the estate that Antoinette lives at, called Coulibri, falls into ruins. The white society of the island ostracizes Antoinette's family, while the black community humiliates them, calling Antoinette a "white cockroach".
Antoinette finds relief from the degrading insults of society in the overrun garden of Coulibri. This garden and the surrounding forest signify Antoinette's isolation and lost innocence. Even though Antoinette finds relief here from the problems in her life, this uncivilized escape from humanity alters Antoinette's personality. The more time Antoinette spends in the wilderness, the more isolated from society Antoinette becomes. As Antoinette devotes more of her time to wandering the garden, she is increasingly distressed by the manner in which she is tried by society, until she completely hates people.
To Antoinette, the garden at Coulibri is luscious and beautiful, comparable to the Garden of Eden. However, the garden contains a sinister atmosphere, and the plants are animistic in nature - "One was snaky looking, another like an octopus with long thin brown tentacles bare of leaves hanging from a twisted root." (Pg 17) Before Antoinette was born and the estate ruined, the garden was both beautiful and tamed, an innocent Eden. Now the garden is wild and excessive, just like the rest of Coulibri, including its inhabitants.
Completely engrossed in her escape from reality, Antoinette doesn't feel the need for human companionship. Antoinette's mother, however, hates being isolated from society, and finds relief when new neighbors settle in a nearby estate. The neighbors visit Coulibri and laugh at Antoinette's wild and dirty appearance, furthering Antoinette's predisposed view of people being evil and causing Antoinette to feel ashamed.
After the visitors leave, Antoinette has a nightmare where she is running through a forest, being chased by someone who hates her. Antoinette is unable to identify the man pursuing her, and as he gets increasingly closer, Antoinette screams and wakes up. The dark forest defines the atmosphere of the nightmare, symbolizing the hatred, greed, and sinfulness of the man hunting her.
Tragic events in the novel force Antoinette to attend a convent school in Spanish Town, where Antoinette is finally liberated from her horrible past. Sheltered from nature and the wild forests, Antoinette spends the most normal part of her life studying under the nuns of the convent.
When Antoinette turns seventeen, Mr. Mason (her stepfather) visits Antoinette to inform her that she will be leaving the convent and returning to society. Antoinette obediently accepts the decision, feeling a great sense of loss and sadness for losing her only refuge. That night she has the same nightmare that she experienced years before, only she is wearing a white wedding dress and following the man, crying when she looks at his face and seeing only hatred. When Antoinette refuses to follow any further, the trees around her jerk violently. These trees once again symbolize the hatred, sinfulness, and greed of the man with her.
Shortly after leaving the convent, Antoinette is forced to marry an unnamed Englishman. For their honeymoon they travel to one of Antoinette's estates in Granbois, meaning great forest in French (gran = great, bois = forest). Antoinette's husband is intimidated by the colorful environment of the island, feeling uncomfortable and out of place. Both Antoinette and her husband enjoy their marriage until Antoinette's husband receives a letter from a Creole who claims to be Antoinette's half-brother. This man describes the madness and cruelty of Antoinette's family, causing Antoinette's husband to feel confused and distressed. Antoinette's husband starts to distance himself from Antoinette, and one night runs into the forest surrounding the estate. He finds an abandoned estate in the middle of the forest, and frequently returns to the site. The forest takes over and controls Antoinette's husband, much as it had controlled Antoinette as a child. Instead of causing a feeling of isolation, the forest fosters his hatred and greed, further ruining his relationship with Antoinette. His hatred for Antoinette continues to grow as he spends more time on the island, until he completely despises Antoinette.
The destructive nature of the forest on a person's personality denotes the forest as a symbol of the dark qualities of human nature. As a manifestation of the greed, exploitation, hatred, sinfulness, lost innocence, and isolation that are felt so abundantly in the atmosphere of post-slavery Jamaica, the forests serve as an important symbol in Wide Sargasso Sea.

16 comments:

  1. You're the first to quote and it's long! Those both should score major points on the test!

    You'll have to ask Auntie about your refrence to HOD: it shows your knowledge of more than one literary work (great!) and it is distracting from the rest of the paper (um...?) as the audience wonders "why did she mention HOD?" or "Ive never heard of HOD...what is HOD?

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  2. Haha... hopefully the reader will know about Heart of Darkness >.<
    I included it because the symbolism used is extremely similar, almost identical even, to the forests in Wide Sargasso Sea.

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  3. I really liked your post, but because I'm a formatting nerd I kept wanting to put an extra space in between the paragraphs. Still, I liked the paragraphs that you drew between this book and Heart of Darkness, and I actually think that helped me understand the forest because it laid some groundwork for what theme you were talking about. The only thing I would have added is an earlier explanation of "Le Bois" (for a while I was all like lol wut is that) and maybe one or two examples of how society rejects Antoinette. Like, a specific instance of schoolyard bullying or something, to show that an ordinary person would not have caved, but she did because of the influence of the forest etc.

    I enjoyed reading your post. :)

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  4. PARALLELS. I MEANT I LIKED THE PARALLELS YOU DREW, not the paragraphs. I can not haz proofread.

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  5. haha I had the spaces between the paragraphs, but when I posted they disappeared... ;_;
    Thanks for the comments guys!

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  6. Good connections between this work and Heart of Darkness, especially how the forest affects everyone differently and symbolizes darkness of character. In the third paragraph, "animalistic" might be closer than "animistic" (animism = belief in inanimate objects being alive), though both work; it seems like "animalistic" is more what you were going for, since you're discussing the wildness of the forest.
    I especially like the historical analysis
    in the conclusion.

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  7. I liked your essay a lot! I've never heard of this book before, and your analysis actually really helped me along plot-wise as well, which is really nice. Being a formatting Nazi (more so than Sarah sometimes), I found it a little hard to read the green on blue background. That was basically my only criticism, and it doesn't even really matter. You did a really good job!
    -Jacob Garner

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  8. Nice job...I liked how you were able to make connections with HOD-it really helped me understand everything a whole lot better. I also liked how you were able to go deep without losing focus. Your ability to summarize while keeping in mind the symbolic aspect of the novel made it a lot easier to read and I really enjoyed it!

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  9. um... editing note (since I can't edit it anymore apparently)...

    I noticed a typo in the three paragraph (which looks like the second before there are no spaces between paragraphs -_-)

    the sentence should be "As Antoinette devotes more of her time to wandering the garden, she is increasingly distressed by the manner in which she is treated by society, until she completely hates people." instead of "As Antoinette devotes more of her time to wandering the garden, she is increasingly distressed by the manner in which she is tried by society, until she completely hates people."

    *switching tried to treated in the sentence*


    sorry about that >.<


    ohh and in response to Jordan Takayama, I was thinking animalisitic but the word check said it was wrong so I changed it without thinking...
    thanks for catching that!

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  10. Caity! Oh my goodness the first paragraph. That Heart Of Darkness reference was awesome! I was like "Gotta read more!". You do realized that this is majorly long. XD. Just wanted to put that out there. Now I have to go read this book. For a while when I was reading I was like wait what but then around the fifth paragraph I was like "OH! Got it." If only you could hear me clapping. :D

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  11. Caitlin, I must say this was beautifully written. Not only were you able to give specific instances in the story that lent evidence to the fact that the forest symbolizes the darker side of human nature, but you were able to tie them all together smoothly and give a very comprehensive summary of your book; those things show that you truly understand this book.
    In terms of critique, I would just say that for the next prompt, try not you use the book you're writing about if you can because during the AP Exam you won't have any references to look at when writing the essay (I'm assuming you used your book due to the quote you took from it). Other than that, great job!

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  12. This was very very well written and I think everyone has said something about your reference to Heart of Darkness. I think I love your essay as much as I do because your last paragraph and how specific and clear you were about your examples and why you chose your symbol. Good job!

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  13. your essay was very longgg! but it still kept my interest because it was very well-written and I like how the essay flowed along with the plot. It read really smoothly because as the essay goes on, you learn more and more about the plot and it sheds more light on Antoinette. By the end of reading your essay I felt I knew a lot about the book, including the deeper meanings of it.

    I also liked how you connected it to Heart of Darkness since its something that we have already read so it made it more relatable. Good essay :)

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  14. Caitlan,

    OMG GIRL THAT WAS LONG! haha but I liked it so much! Okay time to get serious :)

    1) I loved how right at the beginning you already compared it to another piece of literature that we have all read: Heart of Darkness. Brilliant analogy on your part :) You chose something that we can all relate to and gave us a reference to compare your story to. I don't think I would have known what to expect if you hadn't said that. So, thanks for that :)

    2) I liked how you showed how the community didn't accept her whatsoever and how no matter who it was, she wasn't in their crowd or anything like that. It made me visualize the entire community leaving her alone and her being by herself looking lonely and whatnot. Your imagery was really good!

    3) Okay I'll combine what I'm going to say in this comment with my first one. I really like how you compare the components in the novel with other components that we can relate to outside of the novel. It really helps to put things into perspective and gives us an idea of what you are trying to say.

    4) I liked how you summarized what happened in the book in great detail. (hmm... a very detailed summary... does such a thing exist? i'm not sure) Throughout your summary, you also analyzed the dynamics and complexity of Antoinette's character and how it develops, giving us an insight of what she is going through and how she is changing during the novel.

    5) Your explanations of the different symbols were very thought out. It was easy to tell that you didn't just make something up, which I appreciate :) I think you put a lot of effort into this essay and it shows greatly.

    All in all, I really enjoyed this essay and I can't wait to read more from you.

    (omg i think my comment was almost as long as your essay. actually no i dont think so. your essay was a book in the making but i love you anyway! hah :) )

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  15. Caitlin, Watch out for summarizing!! That will lose you points! You need to keep it tighter and more that its your analysis with points from the novel to support you. This was more like a summary with you making points along the way. Be aware of use of quotes, you will have to memorize them to use them in your essay. You will not have your book there to quote from.

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